THIS WAS A VERY DIFFICULT ESSAY FOR ME. I THINK IT WAS WHERE YOU HAD TO MAKE EXAMPLES BUT AT THE SAME TIME TRY TO STAY FOCUS ON WHAT YOU ARE WRITING ABOUT. I CHANGED MY TOPIC THREE TIME BECAUSE IF I CAN'T RELATE TO AN TOPIC IT IS VERY HARD FOR ME TO WRITE ABOUT IT. I THINK THE BEST THE TO DO WHEN WRITING IS JUST HAVE AN OPEN MIND TO EVERYTHING. BUT OVERALL I THINK I COULD HAVE DONE BETTER BUT IT WASN'T SO BAD NEITHER. I DON'T LIKE ENGLISH AT ALL BUT I'M TRYING TO OVERCOME THAT BECAUSE I WANT TO BE ABLE TO WRITE A PAPER THAT MAY NOT BE PERFECT BUT ISN'T FAR FROM IT.